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Sketch: Artist’s impression of something; unfinished work

“The most memorable characters are the ones with the deepest flaws.”

– Neil Gaiman  

Foil characters:

A literary device that emphasizes the contrasting qualities of another character.  Foil characters are used to enhance certain aspects of each character, creating more depth through distinctive traits, characteristics, or motivations placed side by side.  Foil characters draw attention to the qualities of the main character by providing a way to contrast those qualities with either opposite traits, or traits that may shed further light on the main character’s attributes.  

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In storytelling, characters serve as the driving force to move the story forward.  Foil characters can be a powerful tool to add layers of complexity and intrigue within a story.  They can even act as a mirror to the main character, showing contrasting qualities to reflect and magnify the main character’s qualities. 

Here are 10 Tips on Writing Foil Characters:

  1. Identify Contrasting Traits: How is the foil character opposite of or different from the main character?  
  2. Common Goals, Different Approaches: Both characters may have the same goals, but the way they approach pursuing the goals should be vastly different, emphasizing their distinct personalities. 
  3. Highlight Weaknesses and Strengths: Each of the characters will have their own contrasting or complementing strengths and weaknesses, adding to the overall narrative.  
  4. Change over time: Both the foil character and the main character should evolve throughout the story.  Their interactions with each other can influence the changes that take place in each of them.
  5. Use Dialogue to show differences: Create dialogue that shows the communication styles of each character, showing the different ways they act and speak towards each other.
  6. Physical Contrasts: Include physical differences that symbolize the internal distinctions between the characters, such as habits, mannerisms, or appearance.  
  7. Create conflict between the main character and foil.  Both internal and external conflict can be used to highlight the differences between the characters.  
  8. Show the motivations of the characters.  Your readers will be able to connect with the character’s better when they can see the motivation and intention behind the actions.
  9. Foreshadow: To build anticipation and hold interest, drop subtle hints early on about the contrasts between the characters.
  10. Shared Experiences, Divergent Lessons: Give the characters the same experiences, but have them learn from and interpret from the experiences differently.  

Setting: Dystopian apocalyptic future

Main Character: Loves animals, wants a pet

Foil Character: Can’t stand animals OR wants the opposite pet of the main character

Write the discussion or scene where they are choosing a pet.  

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